2. The photos are poorly arranged. They look like they have been just randomly paced. Maybe a more structured looking layout would have looked better.
3. The white and cream don't go together. One or the other should have been uses but not both.
4. The red section in the middle is hard to read. A different background colour would be an improvement, as the red hasn't been used before it looks out of place.
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